Humanities+Assessment

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 Concepts: (time)  Facts about past societies  ||  The piece contains many instances of fact relating to the time that gives a good idea of village life and the black death   ||  The piece contains good amount of fact about village life and death   ||  The piece contains certain items of fact about either the black death or village life but not both. ||  Limited amounts of factual information from the time. || Many good points Nathan with a fairly good story. It really could do with a check on the grammar. The first paragraph is huge, containing many areas you could split it up. To gain higher levels add more than one thought about the causes and possible ways of treating the plague.
 *  mm  ||  7-8   ||  5-6   ||  3-4   ||  1-2   ||
 *  Criteria B
 *  Thoughts about The Black Death  ||  V. Accurate description and Middle ages thoughts about causes and possible responses to BD   ||  Good description of thoughts on causes and responses   ||  A description of either thoughts on causes or responses but not both   || <span style="line-height: normal; margin-bottom: .0001pt; margin-bottom: 0cm; mso-element-anchor-horizontal: margin; mso-element-anchor-vertical: page; mso-element-frame-hspace: 9.0pt; mso-element-top: 41.3pt; mso-element-wrap: around; mso-element: frame; mso-height-rule: exactly;"> Very limited description on thoughts or inaccurate and not related to thoughts of the time.   ||
 * <span style="line-height: normal; margin-bottom: .0001pt; margin-bottom: 0cm; mso-element-anchor-horizontal: margin; mso-element-anchor-vertical: page; mso-element-frame-hspace: 9.0pt; mso-element-top: 41.3pt; mso-element-wrap: around; mso-element: frame; mso-height-rule: exactly;"> Effects (cause and consequence)  || <span style="line-height: normal; margin-bottom: .0001pt; margin-bottom: 0cm; mso-element-anchor-horizontal: margin; mso-element-anchor-vertical: page; mso-element-frame-hspace: 9.0pt; mso-element-top: 41.3pt; mso-element-wrap: around; mso-element: frame; mso-height-rule: exactly;"> An understanding of the improvements for peasants explained well. Explain consequences on freedom and wealth   || <span style="line-height: normal; margin-bottom: .0001pt; margin-bottom: 0cm; mso-element-anchor-horizontal: margin; mso-element-anchor-vertical: page; mso-element-frame-hspace: 9.0pt; mso-element-top: 41.3pt; mso-element-wrap: around; mso-element: frame; mso-height-rule: exactly;"> Improvements explained well through cause and consequence, although concentration will be on either freedom or wealth   || <span style="line-height: normal; margin-bottom: .0001pt; margin-bottom: 0cm; mso-element-anchor-horizontal: margin; mso-element-anchor-vertical: page; mso-element-frame-hspace: 9.0pt; mso-element-top: 41.3pt; mso-element-wrap: around; mso-element: frame; mso-height-rule: exactly;"> The benefits for peasants are described but not explained very well.   || <span style="line-height: normal; margin-bottom: .0001pt; margin-bottom: 0cm; mso-element-anchor-horizontal: margin; mso-element-anchor-vertical: page; mso-element-frame-hspace: 9.0pt; mso-element-top: 41.3pt; mso-element-wrap: around; mso-element: frame; mso-height-rule: exactly;"> Only basic descriptions.   ||
 * <span style="line-height: normal; margin-bottom: .0001pt; margin-bottom: 0cm; mso-element-anchor-horizontal: margin; mso-element-anchor-vertical: page; mso-element-frame-hspace: 9.0pt; mso-element-top: 41.3pt; mso-element-wrap: around; mso-element: frame; mso-height-rule: exactly;"> Presentation and organisat//ion//  || <span style="line-height: normal; margin-bottom: .0001pt; margin-bottom: 0cm; mso-element-anchor-horizontal: margin; mso-element-anchor-vertical: page; mso-element-frame-hspace: 9.0pt; mso-element-top: 41.3pt; mso-element-wrap: around; mso-element: frame; mso-height-rule: exactly;"> Flawless grammar and spelling. Use of paragraphs.   || <span style="line-height: normal; margin-bottom: .0001pt; margin-bottom: 0cm; mso-element-anchor-horizontal: margin; mso-element-anchor-vertical: page; mso-element-frame-hspace: 9.0pt; mso-element-top: 41.3pt; mso-element-wrap: around; mso-element: frame; mso-height-rule: exactly;"> A few issues relating to grammar and spelling.   || <span style="line-height: normal; margin-bottom: .0001pt; margin-bottom: 0cm; mso-element-anchor-horizontal: margin; mso-element-anchor-vertical: page; mso-element-frame-hspace: 9.0pt; mso-element-top: 41.3pt; mso-element-wrap: around; mso-element: frame; mso-height-rule: exactly;"> More issues   || <span style="line-height: normal; margin-bottom: .0001pt; margin-bottom: 0cm; mso-element-anchor-horizontal: margin; mso-element-anchor-vertical: page; mso-element-frame-hspace: 9.0pt; mso-element-top: 41.3pt; mso-element-wrap: around; mso-element: frame; mso-height-rule: exactly;"> Very untidy and spelling and grammar poor   ||